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Here is an outline of two body paragraphs to support a stance on the topic: II. Corporations have already been sponsoring sports, and there haven't been any proven, negative repercussions. III. These corporations have provided important facilities for children to learn. Which thesis statement ties these ideas together? Corporations are humanitarian and help children; additionally, ads are at home too. Corporations have already been providing sponsorship, which has been valuable in the past. Sponsorship is life for so many around the world.

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To effectively tie together the ideas presented in the body paragraphs, the thesis statement should emphasize the positive impact of corporate sponsorship in sports, particularly regarding its benefits for children and communities.

A suitable thesis statement could be:

"Corporate sponsorship in sports has proven to be beneficial, as it has not only supported valuable facilities for children but has also shown no significant negative repercussions."

This statement encapsulates the main points from both body paragraphs, highlighting the positive contributions of corporations while addressing the lack of negative consequences.

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